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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
5/23/2003 |
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| Awesome ......I enjoyed this poem |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
5/18/2003 |
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| You had me going there for a while. So glad it was just a dream. We need couples like to you keep believing it is possible :-) Great write! |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
5/18/2003 |
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| Jack, this is beautiful. I love it. And thanks for visiting my site and leaving these encouraging comments. I will continue. S |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Bohen |
5/17/2003 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Janet Caldwell |
5/17/2003 |
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I was shocked at the beginning of this, so glad to know that it's a dream. Wishing you and your lovely wife all the best.
JC xoxoxoxo |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
5/17/2003 |
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Sometimes a little scare will keep us on our toes, helping us to be thankful and appreciative of what we have. Very nice poem, Jack.
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/17/2003 |
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| great write, jack! :) (((HUGS))) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
5/17/2003 |
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Oh..I loved this one so much! What an excellent poem,
Beautiful!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/17/2003 |
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Oh! I had many of those dreams in my life....but usualy I am so upset I start to cry.....and hope for the best....hehehe
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
5/17/2003 |
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| Good message here...yes, I too think that sometimes our dreams try to teach us. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
5/16/2003 |
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great write Jack
excellent, great reading
William |
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| Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza |
5/16/2003 |
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| if all men i know think like you do... i guess life would be easier! |
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| Reviewed by Kelie Urbanec |
5/16/2003 |
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VERY NICE.
THAT IS SCARY WHEN THAT HAPPENS SEEMS SO REAL. GREAT WRITE.
~KELIE~ |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
5/16/2003 |
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| Big sigh...thank you for sharing this very beautiful revelation |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
5/16/2003 |
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Excellent message from dreams.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/16/2003 |
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| Well done. Glad it was just a dream for you. |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
5/16/2003 |
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Hi Jack,
This is great....
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/16/2003 |
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| Very different from you Jack, excellent! Good to see branching out into other arenas of thought... |
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| Reviewed by Victor Jensen |
5/16/2003 |
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| I guess there is a reason why we dream what we do. Some of my dreams I wish would come true but some I'm so happy they are just dreams. Most of my day dreams are positive. I think a dream like you describe in this good poem is a positive, because it just prompts you to consider what you have and not to just take it for granted. It's good for you to know how lucky you really are. |
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