|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|It has to be counted as erotic because it made me feel hot all over.
Lucky lady she is!
Great poem Jack!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|a beautiful write, jack; you met labelle's challenge with a BANG! outstanding job! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Jack, This is such a
beautiul sensual write...
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Superb write! Great rhymes and flows very well with the sensuality of the poem. Wow!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is such a passionate write Jack!!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Jack,,This was beautifully done! The rythym the flow was outstanding. The passion was exciting and brilliant. I'd say the challenge was well met! Lisa|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Jack this is exquisite, not only sensual but so very romantic, capturing an aura of real love. Wonderful response to the challenge.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Jack.....such a passionate write....loved this much!!!!|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|BEAUTIFUL, my friend..
Soft and romantic
I loved this...I read
* Linda *
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is a superb sensual write Jack, and you lost none of your meter and rhyme!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|very well donw for a challenge
an excellent write
|Reviewed by A PAX
|BRAVO TIMES A TRILLLION!|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is passion at its best. Great addition to the challenge :-)!|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|What a beautiful moment....
A sensual, divine write my friend....