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As tears prick my eyes........ by Shamin Bashir Shah Friday, February 20, 2009 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Well this is the poem of a girl who is ditched by her boy friend and she tells her part.
As Tears Prick My Eyes….. As tears prick my eyes, I hold down my cries. Things that I fear, Have atlas come so near. I wish he would care, Of my love so pure and fair. I hope he never dares, To cheat with any other girl again. I wish he would have cleared, That we were no good pairs. When I was not here, With another girl he had an affair. I wish I would never care. As tears prick my eyes, I hold down my cries…….. SHAMIN BASHIR SHAH

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Reviewed by jamal ahmad	5/9/2009

hmhm nice one.




Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi	4/20/2009

Never believe that love is just. Love destroys the very heart that sacrifices itself to it. And yet its pain cannot be regretted. Your poem shows this very clearly and very intensely.




Reviewed by Ann Marquette	2/21/2009

Well done Shamin. It is sad yet very sweet.