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The Closet (A Challenge)
by Michael W. Curry

Thursday, November 13, 2003

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If you were any room in the house... which one would you be and why?


You walk right by my door.
The knob is tarnished but still manages to reflect some light.
You hang your coats of many colors beneath a thousand hats so easily worn... and flutter off to fit in.
The canes and the crutches are stacked upon my squeaky hinges so they do not fall down... standing guard as if protecting a tomb.
The music through my walls sounds muffled.
With each passing gait, the soiled hems of musty satin and lace make the dust motes swirl in unison... recently swept under the door for just this occasion.
The light that weeps through the cracks is orange and red and actually smells like burnt sugar.
It creates grotesque shadows in here that are so much more real than anything out there.
Stained wood has been coverd by glossy paint which has been buried in misleading wallpaper...
all except the closet... where perfect blood runs down it's walls and covers my sin.
It is said that I am a temple.
I'll have to take this on faith.

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Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 11/18/2003
Wonderful, Michael. I'm afraid I don't even have a room like your closet. Different, that is. But I'll look for one. Good poem.

Carmen
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 11/15/2003
Deeply spiritual ... this touched my heart. Doing challenges like this has helped me with a touch of writer's block I have.
It is said that I am a temple.
I'll have to take this on faith.
Terrific piece.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 11/14/2003
A gripping profound write Michael!Superb poetry!Excellent challenge, I'll think about it;-)
Reviewed by Dale Clark 11/14/2003
Great write and the challenge is interesting.
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 11/14/2003
Michael, I love the thoughts and images this provokes, and a very revealing write. I am going to give this challenge some thought, even though I haven't had time for the others, this one is very interesting... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 11/14/2003
Excellent write!!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/14/2003
You have totally intrigued me, Sir. Another most interesting challenge. Will I ever get any work done? Hmm. Enjoyed!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 11/14/2003
This is a profound poem and a wonderful challenge.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 11/14/2003
This poem is deep with meanings. Wonderful write Michael!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 11/14/2003
This is a challenge I will take on :-) Love your intake on why a closet would be the best room in a home. Wonderful flow of images and thoughts. Great write.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 11/14/2003
Michael, Your poem is wonderful, 'the light that weeps through the cracks' just astounded me.
This is an interesting challenge, one I'll have to give some thought. Well done. Lisa
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