|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely, a beautiful poem, you are indeeded quite blessed, I loved this,
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|What a gorgeous awakening poem, Michael! My favorite line:
"The clouds overhead cover moon cover sun."
So exquisite in its simplicity, yet almost aching in its complexity.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You make a very good point in this touching piece. I know I missed some moments when my children were growing up. I am just grateful that I did not miss them all. Love and peace, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|nice write, michael; enjoyed~ and awwwww, you have two lovely kids! they are PRECIOUS! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Wonderful write, Michael. Very Cute Picture!|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|A wonderful write. Very peaceful.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Michael this is a fantastic poem..the girls are so adorable...but this verse for me says it all....
"My wife in the garden. The girls on the swing.
The gems in my pond look like fish.
Birds making nests chirping in the ravine.
What possibly more could I wish? "
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|beautiful uplifting write!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|This has touched me so deeply. A joyous poem and written so well...it flows beautifully.
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Blessed, indeed! A peaceful place you've found, and how well you write about it. Thank you.