|Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
A beuatiful tribute to another young lost life. Our society is much too violent and it is heartbreaking to know that human life is not always the most valued thing on the earth. It's never easy to write of such things but you did a wonderful job with this one.
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Wonderful tribute Dee!
Breaks my heart though!
I used to live in Jeff City too!
Write me and we can talk sometime!
I live in Texas now but lived in
Jeff City for 8 years!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|heartbreaking! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. >tears <|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Dee this made me cry, a gorgeous, touching poem|
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|so sad, but very well done on this|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was an outstanding and lovely tribute,
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|great writing expression tribute D. l&p G|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|This one beautiful Tribute ...Dee C
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sorry to hear of this tragic event ... happens much too often ...your poem beautifully expresses the strength and resolve to endure ... excellent tribute ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I am quite unable to comprehend why such things have to continue to occur in this dimension where we interact. You elicit well the feelings that need to be expressed. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Dee I'm so sorry for such a tragedy!
This tribute is exceptional, very beautifully expressed!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You have captured what she would have wished, A loving mother to the end. Great tribute|
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|This is special and I'm sure not easy!
Very well done!!!
Love this line
"At the end of day look for me within each changing sunset"
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is so hard to understand life taken this way.
I had a cousin this happened too and I still will always feel
the pain... A wonderful heartfelt tribute........
Take care Sweetie.
Love Lady Di
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh Dee C this is so very sad...but beautiful Tribute my friend!!
Glad to see you again!!
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|The most difficult struggle is to understand such things, and I just can't.
Wonderful love here Dee.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Dee, this is a very sad and beautiful poem. Serenity's pain is over and I'm sure she's in good hands. The burden now lies on her family. I pray that they shall find comfort in your words and in the strength of God and in their memories a lasting peace.|