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The Final Blow
by Dee C.

Saturday, June 12, 2004
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The Final Blow


Slashing soft flesh

The knife is turned

Blood spilling fresh

Crumbling spurned


Within a heart dies

A soul starts to cry

Dead eyes dry

A voice with no reply


Strong bonds broken

Never to be mended

Words go unspoken

Love has ended


Look of evil eyes

Stormy breath sighed

No good-byes

Only battle cries.


Dee 2004/6/12


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Reviewed by Miller Caldwell 10/31/2004
Death comes to us all but once. Some too early, some too late
Some deaths to worship, some deaths to hate.

Yes you've captured it here.
Best wishes
Reviewed by Sherry Gibson 8/8/2004
One of the best descriptions I've ever read of a broken love. You are doing some deep dark awesome work. I must come back and read some more!

Reviewed by na na (Reader) 6/19/2004
Battle cry indeed! Nothing left after the massacre is their? But maybe the ground screaming out the crime on deaf ears. Much pain and sorrow here. Murch loss I believe. Bill Murray
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 6/16/2004
cool write
Reviewed by jude forese 6/15/2004
dark, insightful imagery ...
Reviewed by Marco Landi 6/13/2004
ohhh what a battle cries....I felt the pain...Marco
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/12/2004
Deep,dark and powerful! Vivid images,
in this chiller,Dee!Good to see you;-)!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/12/2004
A dark gem
great write
enjoyed very much

Reviewed by Lori Moore 6/12/2004
Great images. You certainly describe "evil eyes" well. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/12/2004

*shivers* a strong, emotional write and pic--perfectly complementary to each other

hope you're okay

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/12/2004
The title had me concerned I must admitt, but oh boy what you say, peirces the heart.

Very good, excellently expressed write..GOOd luck..
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/12/2004

This rips the heart to pieces Dee C!!

Warm love Tinka
Reviewed by John Bidwell 6/12/2004
So great to see you Dee, but OMG.
Put my heart through the shredder here.
Awesome, powerful.
Warn me next time.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 6/12/2004
i always miss ya....
"Within a heart dies

A soul starts to cry

Dead eyes dry

A voice with no reply

Strong bonds broken

Never to be mended

Words go unspoken"

Love ends < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < <SO very true this one touches deeply MI Lady!!!!!

Lady peg

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