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The Final Blow
by Dee C.

Saturday, June 12, 2004
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The Final Blow


 


Slashing soft flesh


The knife is turned


Blood spilling fresh


Crumbling spurned


 


Within a heart dies


A soul starts to cry


Dead eyes dry


A voice with no reply


 


Strong bonds broken


Never to be mended


Words go unspoken


Love has ended


 


Look of evil eyes


Stormy breath sighed


No good-byes


Only battle cries.


 


Dee 2004/6/12


 

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Reviewed by Miller Caldwell 10/31/2004
Dee
Death comes to us all but once. Some too early, some too late
Some deaths to worship, some deaths to hate.

Yes you've captured it here.
Best wishes
Miller
Reviewed by Sherry Gibson 8/8/2004
Dee,
One of the best descriptions I've ever read of a broken love. You are doing some deep dark awesome work. I must come back and read some more!

Sherry
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 6/19/2004
Battle cry indeed! Nothing left after the massacre is their? But maybe the ground screaming out the crime on deaf ears. Much pain and sorrow here. Murch loss I believe. Bill Murray
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 6/16/2004
cool write
Reviewed by jude forese 6/15/2004
dark, insightful imagery ...
Reviewed by Marco Landi 6/13/2004
ohhh what a battle cries....I felt the pain...Marco
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/12/2004
Deep,dark and powerful! Vivid images,
in this chiller,Dee!Good to see you;-)!
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/12/2004
A dark gem
great write
enjoyed very much

William
Reviewed by Lori Moore 6/12/2004
Great images. You certainly describe "evil eyes" well. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 6/12/2004
((((dee))))

*shivers* a strong, emotional write and pic--perfectly complementary to each other

hope you're okay

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 6/12/2004
The title had me concerned I must admitt, but oh boy what you say, peirces the heart.

Very good, excellently expressed write..GOOd luck..
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 6/12/2004
OOOhhh!!

This rips the heart to pieces Dee C!!

Warm love Tinka
Reviewed by John Bidwell 6/12/2004
So great to see you Dee, but OMG.
Put my heart through the shredder here.
Awesome, powerful.
Warn me next time.
John
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 6/12/2004
DEE C{{HUGS}}}}
i always miss ya....
"Within a heart dies



A soul starts to cry



Dead eyes dry



A voice with no reply







Strong bonds broken



Never to be mended



Words go unspoken"

Love ends < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < < <SO very true this one touches deeply MI Lady!!!!!

Lady peg

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