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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/10/2008 |
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| Pain to be endured as the illness comes upon you. Won't relent as long as you are tense. Will be less painful with medicines if you take them. Pain is so intense inside and out somedays that I do so wish God would take me away and bring me a painfree life. Maybe my times isn't up yet, so I abide my pain and try to forget it is there. |
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| Reviewed by Rafika Anderson |
12/27/2007 |
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| Oh, this brings to mind so many, many events in my life. I suppose I can easily relate to your well-written report of this attack. I like the balance you maintain in the rhythm and rhyme. Great effort. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Bossis |
7/31/2007 |
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| You have made aware thus> de-throning it's despair {wonder-filled}-Well meant love{ <*>}Ted |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/1/2005 |
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| There are many different kinds of levels that this could be read at and I find all levels extremely interesting. |
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| Reviewed by Leslie Bond |
1/19/2005 |
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| Though my review is late, I wish you the best of your heartfelt poetry. Les |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/14/2004 |
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| I wish you healing, love, peace, and strength. Thank you for sharing your meaningful sentiments. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Hanley Harding |
1/28/2004 |
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I just caught you being "Featured" while logging off. I'm glad I stopped by to read this. It's very evocative. Doc
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| Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry, R.C. |
1/13/2004 |
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I know how you feel, Erin. I've lived with MS and Lupus as well as a host of other maladies since age 12. I'll be 60 in June. I never know from one day to the next what will be, if I'll even be. This is a great write! I wrote of a particular episode of MS that I experienced 2 years ago: still lingers and attacks today- "Nerves Unsheathed" here in my den. ~~Bonnie Q
Associate Editor, WA
Waltsan Publishing, TX |
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| Reviewed by Rodd Jokre |
11/13/2003 |
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I hear your call... Good write...
Rodd |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/8/2003 |
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| I suppose everybody has his or her own demons to exorcise. I hope you have made the right choice as to how to deal with them. |
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| Reviewed by Kijuana Henry (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| I am a reader but also the author, Becca Henry. What a gripping story in the poem! Please read my daily struggles with my illness should you have the time. WOW! You are so very brave and have faith to fight, like how I am doing. We must remain STRONG, my dear friend! Read throughout my sight and you shall see my story. authorsden.com/rebeccaehenry |
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| Reviewed by William Heffner |
7/4/2003 |
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A poetic justification for a divine warrior friend.
Keep the faith, your best days are ahead of you.
Officer William Heffner |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
4/30/2003 |
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| Good writing piece nice flow |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
3/26/2003 |
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Erin,
revealing, honest and real!
By the way, yes without humor, I'd never find the light to crawl into the morrow!
Warmly,
Rodney Evan Bohen |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/14/2003 |
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From "sucker punch" through "I long to be someone without this illness part of me," you keep the reader's attention and make
hi/r feel your pain. Sorry if the pain is real...if this is autobiographical,I mean. But of course, the pain is real either way. Touching! Phyllis |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
3/11/2003 |
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I too struggle daily with pain because of an illness with no cure. Keep writing ... it's a good release.
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
2/15/2003 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Smith |
2/12/2003 |
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| Oh Erin, what a comparison! I can feel your pain. I will pray for you. This is very well done. God bless you! Love, Beth |
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| Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick |
1/20/2003 |
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| Can relate all too well. Very honest. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Gibson |
12/10/2002 |
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| The symbolism in this poetry is outstanding Erin. The words flow so easy! Glad I stumbled across you this morning so that I could enjoy a wonderful, thought provoking read. So many of us know this monster your words describe so well. Visit my den and ready, "Myself" and you will find the same monster lurking there, described in my style! |
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| Reviewed by STEVE JONES |
12/7/2002 |
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| GREAT POEM..A THORN IN YOUR FLESH KEEPS YOU HUMBLE AND KNOWING ITS THERE MAKES YOU STRONGER...KEEP WRITING |
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| Reviewed by Betty Watson |
12/4/2002 |
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Very good and true to the heart.
Betty |
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| Reviewed by David W Turner |
11/18/2002 |
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| This poem is riveting. It lets the reader know almost what it is like to be helpless as you are attacked from within. Good job!! |
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| Reviewed by Stephanie Sawyer, author |
11/8/2002 |
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| It catches immediately, holding attention and inviting curiosity. As the name is of the work, so is the grip on the need to know more. Poignant and compelling for compassion. |
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| Reviewed by Sandi Braveheart |
11/7/2002 |
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this is a powerful read~ great job!
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