There is more to loving Me
by jing javier
Friday, March 12, 2004
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Just me here,... What a Year I must say. This is only the fifth time this year, that I have been able to post here... hence this email to let you all know, that I loved reading your poems, but if i had spent all the time, replying then you would also be in the same boat... but I would like to let you all know that you are all GREAT poets...
Thank you to those who commented on my work as well...
Anyway, have a great day and keep on writing!
My body is not the essence of who I am,
There is a mind that sparks with sarcasm,
There are eyes that would look at you
with disbelief as you hit on me, just for the fun.
Mummer the words of love,
after just one night of scorching hot passions,
I ain't Nobody's fool,
It is called lust, honey,
some of us are Only capable of feeling this singluar emotion
- I am not one of them.
Being in love, I love the whole package,
The drunkeness, the putdowns, the
Grumpy morning wake up calls,
I take The good with the bad, that is love.
Fun is a piece of cake in which
I 'lust' to sink my teeth into,
Praise of doing something right
Springs a leak in my watery track leading
To my heart that speaks only in
Tongues of love; I am its slave.
If you're lovin' me for fun,
pack Your bags now or else you will be sorry,
My body is a weapon that could
Drain you of essence, but that thought
Is only a linger that I don't favor,
Get your pleasure while you can,
Coz there is more to loving me, like a brain.
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|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|This is a keeper.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|nice to see you here again, jing; i sure have missed you!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
wonderful write; thanks for the sharing!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Just plain excellent Jing!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Fantastic write, expression of my sentiments, and concur with your bio, great stuff|