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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
5/10/2004 |
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Jing, very deep and penetrating words that enter into my mind as a flowing jewel of poetry. Free verse written by a free heart. Hugs
Bill |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/10/2004 |
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dangling memories
are finally given voice
you have voiced them potently ... |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/8/2004 |
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I've been wandering where you've been.
Too Good!
I am never seen
for the dangling verbs
that prance playfully across
the treasured words
of a moment wanted but
now forgotten.
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
5/8/2004 |
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| WONDERFUL flow in this poem! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/8/2004 |
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I agree with Ted!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
5/7/2004 |
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| The last lines are stupendous. |
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