I Want To Be Your Secret
by jing javier
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Let me whisper a love song, to get you in the mood for what I'm about
If ever I felt something I know it's now.
I want to make love to your mind.
Unravel your darkest fantasies.
Just tonight, speak something in your ear that will let you know how you feel.
I want to take you to the next level and spring forth a mental climax to settle
all the doubts and disputes.
Let me whisper in your ear and tell a secret or two.
I don't know if it's your smile that has me spellbound.
Or is it your body's grooves.
I looked for a while now and now I think I know what you want.
So once again let me whisper in your ear and tell a secret or two.
Boy, I want you, and I want to be your secret.
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|Reviewed by s u (Reader)
|so were you someone's secret in your former work place?|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Lovely write Jing
You have a way with words
I enjoy what I have read so far
I will continue reading some more of your
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
|very well done,
it is great to be someones secret :)
|Reviewed by richard poor
|i wish i was your secret..
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You make clear your intentions in a beautiful poetic manner in these verses, jing. Lovely. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr
|Loves being someones secret . Must agree smile can sure spellbound me.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Woo Girl, this is very seductive and warm, I'm sure his ears are waiting.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Sweet write jing!!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Oh sweet Jing, you could be my secret anytime! I would keep it next to my chest and never tell a soul. Who would want to surrrender a rose more beautiful than the stars. Lovely, strong, envigorating poem. You rock rock rock lady. Love xox Bill|