|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Holy cow, this is fantastic, Jing!! Lovely sequence and flow, word choices and imagery from such, and the truth of it all, superb! :)|
|Reviewed by Tien Avielle
|oh my, you are ...good at summaries! Thanks for reading me, and drawing me here!|
|Reviewed by Afrika Abney
|Sing that song. Very eloquent. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|having just come from your piano poem, my first thought here was 'songs in the key of life'.. though not my words, I think they fit.. this just hums along and is simply fascinating from start to end. I love rhyme and rhythm.. you have a beauty in this one. katy.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Beautiful! This was a beautiful piece, a great write, keep it up!
|Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
|So beautiful and true . I think life paints a picture with many faces . You have painted in this piece quite a few . Thank you ,
Well said .
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Jing, This is quite grand! I love the rhyming scheme you've used! This is so true. It flows like soft butter on your tongue. And the picture you have above it is brilliant! You've really got a good one here!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|Superb and so very honestly fresh and true, i loved the buzz out of this, it pulled me right in and spoke volumes to me, truly well done with this, take care...Mark ...|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|A marvelous rhythmic write and potent message. Bravo.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Truly gorgeous Jing….A poem that flows beautifully….Ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very creative & flows well...|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|Very nice write Jing, I liked this.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This very innovative Jing...beautifully done;-)!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
You are excellent
and you are awesome!
|Reviewed by Terry McDermott
|This is original. You are very talented.|
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
This is very creative and beautiful!
Thanks for the prayers.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Wow I love every word this flow and rhyme is magnifient."I'm with the flowers opening their buds
I don't fight with fists but with hugs
I'm a push without the shove
Creeping softly I am *LOVE* "
Lady Peg :)