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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/12/2003 |
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| Someday!! This is beautiful, Jing. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/12/2003 |
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| he is looking for you too. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
6/12/2003 |
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| The longing is palpable, Jing, we all crave the love of our equal. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/11/2003 |
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This was lovely, I hope you find him soon,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/11/2003 |
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Excellent write, Jing!
May I suggest you dye your hair red.:)
tony |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
6/11/2003 |
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It is odd how...when we are not actively looking...it falls upon our laps. Are we more desireable to others when we do not seek? Or is it just that we cannot see the forest if you stand too close to the tree? This is an excellent write, Jing...describing that sentiment exactly.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan |
6/11/2003 |
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Remarkable poem of wanting... Hope you find what you seek...
Jenni |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/11/2003 |
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| beautifully expressed !! |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/11/2003 |
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| Jing, wonderful poem. Very valid questions. Also thought provoking. If we feel that the one for us has already passed us by do we renew old acquaintances? |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
6/11/2003 |
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| good write of yearning, jing; well done! (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/11/2003 |
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Jing~
Love this one but then I always love your work.. You warmed many cold winter and fall nights reading you and then you reading me my friend. He is out there believe me,. Waiting for you!
"Perhaps he's waiting for me.
Wishing for an eternal love.
Only time will tell.
Until then,
My search will never end. "
{{HUGS}}}} Love
Lady Peg
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
6/11/2003 |
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Nice expression of your yearning. Love sometimes surprises us when we least expect it, when we're not looking for it. Keep smiling!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/11/2003 |
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| beautifully expressed Jig, you've been missed;-) Hope you find that love soon, I'm sure it's out there for you! |
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| Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) |
6/11/2003 |
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Ron is right...
Great expressive poetry! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
6/11/2003 |
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Your so young, give it some time. I was yearning
for you to get back.
Sad and great write........ |
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