|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|The last line sums it up, doesn't it. Also, I wonder why the edge of reality has to be jagged. It's bound to cut. There is so much in this poem, I could go on and on but I wont, except to say that it is well written and the pain and anguish that we suffer from time to time is accurately portrayed.
Love, Mom xoxoxo
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent introspective write...|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Excellant and raw, such power of expression here in this one Jing!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Powerful..felt this one deeply, loving your poetry here..
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Edge of Reality" is flowing from the dream's stage to doubtland. It is as esoteric as real, and its definition could be "a quest for happiness".
This poem, "Edge of Reality" provides good reading, while strikes imagination.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Jing this is a powerful write, one of your best.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Thats when I write my blue poetry!!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Great metaphors here
Have a great night.........
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|I lay awake most nights wondering the same thing.... exellent write...