A Candle Fading
by Larry K.
Wednesday, November 20, 2002
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Working alone in a room once so bright.
A room lit by words glowing from within.
Thoughts shinning, sparkling, some burning with passion.
Words in my mind...a candle shinning bright.
A room, once lit by fires of the heart.
Burning constant, filling the room with thoughts...
happiness, sadness, hopes and dreams.
Words in my mind...casting light.
A room now fading, the light slowling dims.
Words that used to fire the flame...
now becoming few and far between.
Words in my mind...melting away like a candle.
A candle, that once gave me light to see.
A candle, once shinning like a beacon...
now becoming dimmer as the wick diminishes.
Like the words in my mind...the candle fades.
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|Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
|An evocative poem that reminds us all of those times when the light fades.|
|Reviewed by sazon
|A light fading is sort of romantic, I think! I just know something will spark. You are one awesome guy, Larry. Love, Heidi|
|Reviewed by mydestiny
loved the poem here on the candle, looking now for the rest,hugs
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|Your candle is eternal and the light will be bright again...have faith! ~ Dee|