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  Dim Lighted Ones
by Elisabeth Barstowe
Monday, April 19, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Thanks Darryn, it was a few words in one of your poems that brought this dream from years ago back to me.

In pillar hall suspended in air,
radiant they were, beings in pair.
Not light, not dark,
yet peaceful and serene.
Perfect harmony mark,
this balanced, blissful scene.

How to explain the pure beauty in this non-light?
The grace of these beings in flight..
The love that echoes ethereal
in benefit of each and all.
It was no easy call to answer
for the Dim Lighted Ones.

A threath upon the survival of man
sounded alarm in ascended clan.
Imbalance tipped the scales back
as non-light came under attack.

As man started seeing in division,
two beings were torn apart and sent on a mission.
Bring light and darkness close as before
balance in the world must be restored.
Or there will be no spiritual evolution,
you may not return without resolution.

Not light, not dark
yet peaceful and serene.
Perfect harmony will mark,
that balanced, blissful scene.

Soon Dim Lighted One...


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Reviewed by pat medlin 5/17/2010
i love this slow;y going thru your recent works and admire your style...according to your bio...think we're much of the same hesitant mind in seeing our writings as something viable to others and the confidence to move ourselves forward...i see you as an accomplished valued poet/writer...keep moving in your own direction...i'll look forward to watching you that first published work.....maybe we can figure it out together....patmedlin
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 4/21/2010
Absolutly beautiful Elizabeth.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 4/20/2010
Pure beauty of non-light. Nice!
Reviewed by Charlie 4/20/2010
I think that's one of the beauties of nature-- shadows from cast light-- beautiful. --Charlie
Reviewed by Felix Perry 4/20/2010
Very intense with so much depth and range...well done.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/19/2010
Not light, not dark
yet peaceful and serene.
Perfect harmony will mark,
that balanced, blissful scene.

Would that it were thus, Elisabeth. Love and best wishes,


  1. G R A S S
  2. Words Will Never Express How Lucky I am to
  3. Love is Like a Flower
  4. Water Kinda Runnin' Kinda Dim
  5. A Little Drop of Rain
  6. A Poem In MInd
  7. Withdrawn...
  8. Ominous
  9. Hands On Arms Around
  10. distant drama and mended wounds
  11. You Donít Know Me
  12. The Liar
  13. It's Simple
  14. Blood Of A Slave, Heart Of A King
  15. Facing the fuure
  17. Blessed
  18. association
  19. A Husband, A Father & Friend
  20. Freedom of Speech

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