by Elisabeth Barstowe
Tuesday, October 11, 2011
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And so you have arrived,
like an angel descended from heaven,
carrying a message forth from the Gods.
I gave up decadence
to keep you safe from harm.
And here you are nothing but
most beautiful miracle,
my life I give to you.
Emotions in motion
a sea of tranquil devotion.
Day turns into night
and night turns into day
as my sprout blooms
I lead the way..
Copyright 2011, Elisabeth Barstowe
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|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Wonderful words about a wonderful little baby! Congrats!
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Elisabeth, it is pride and devotion I read with unwavering commitment -- your "sprout" is a fortunate one -- love him long and intensely my dear friend -- he is your charge and I know you will -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A beautiful Ode For an angel....Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Charlie
|He does look cherubic. I have a darling image in my mind of little sprouts, like chicks, following the momma tuft all around the garden. Lead on, oh flower; lead on.
Enjoyed the write. --Charlie
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|My how beautiful both your words and this bundle of joy.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|So precious truly a little angel as this poem is beautifully written indeed Laura
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Beautiful poem, profoundly wise and softly spoken ~
What a blessing.
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
Beautiful and heartfelt tribute to your baby. Congrats to you! A pic to warm the heart.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|This is beautiful, Elisabeth. Oh, would that I had given the same thought so many, many years ago I would have peace in my waning years.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Hmmm, have you given birth to a wee sprog? Congrats if so. xx|