|Reviewed by Jackie Brooks
|She got HER fix
She ate HIS Twix,
There'd by mutiny in our county
If I were to eat Jim's Bounty!
Jackie <> <
|Reviewed by A PAX
i know the feeling!!! halloween is hell here!!!!!!!!!!!
control control control.........ha......not!
well done! lolol
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|What the hell,
Eat what you will,
You will die happy and fat,
Your coffin will be double wide,
Kinda like the chocolate ice cream you had on the side,
This was a fun read, Cal, I always enjoy seeing others having problems with a diet, not that I would, LOL! If you believe that i have some choice land in the Everglades for sale, kinda wet, but you could grow mosquitoes there...Peace thru Losing Weight, Ed & Rufuz
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so cute and funny! Loved this,
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Sigh... my dearest, this is one of the "truths" in life, is it not? They call to us.. "hellooooooooo" 'EAT ME.. EAT ME'.. and what are we to do? Remember, too, that "ours" is a 'relative' term and family should share, right? Just ask me, Cal, me gal, and I'll find you a loophole. If all else fails, use my excuse: "not my fault... I was drugged!" Ah, well... you put me on the floor once again, and I am way behind in thanking you for that! God, I love your stuff! (grin) katy xox. p.s. I think they have my 'room' ready... bye for now.|
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Hey Girl! Check out my newsletter series. I'll have you dedicated to your goal, and laughing so hard you'll lose ten calories!
blessin's, (and do pretzels, not twixes!)
remember, this is a lifelong change, and people need support.
enjoyed the read,
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Hahaha! Excellent,Calendula,I'll smile all day!;-)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|three hours without a snickers bar?? wow, calendula, i am sure impressed! well done; good luck with your battle with the bulge!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|You mean it lasted that long…lol. I would have ate it before in made it into the frig…lol. Thanks for sharing the light humor, Poet! I enjoyed the read.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Three Hours?! Wow! I am impressed. I'm printing this out for my wife; and to think, she was proud at 2.5 hours. Hah!|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|LOL......IF that was a Snickers bar it would have been gone in five seconds...;)
Very cute write.....ty, Dani
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I love this CUTE light verse write...