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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/27/2004 |
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| Tried it, LOL, and at a time I could tan easier too! Just wanted the head start.......after laughing for a few days.....never again LOL. Great write. |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
10/8/2003 |
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LOL...been there...done that! Loved this!
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) |
10/8/2003 |
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a human checkers board!
Hah, hah, hah!
Very cute!
Love your sense of humour, as always!
Richard Vallance,
Ottawa, Ontario,
CANADA
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/26/2003 |
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Ha ha..I loved this,
excellently written!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
9/26/2003 |
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Yes i have to agree with Dani here, in OZ fake tans!! But then again it's fake tans vs skin cancer and crows feet LOL.
Funny write, enjoyed it very much TY
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Jackie Brooks |
9/26/2003 |
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| What a catastrophe, how long did it take to wear off? Hehehe! I don't use anything at all, my arms and face seem to get a nice light tan quite naturally - but my legs - I think I need some wood stain on them!! Jackie <> < |
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| Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon |
9/25/2003 |
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LOL! I know what you mean. I tried those tanning lotions too. I turned orange!
I finally have given up and realized that my Irish/Scottish heritage makes it almost impossible for me to get a decent tan and I have resigned myself to be "fashionably" pale. ;) Silver |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
9/25/2003 |
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| Try Banana Boats, Deep dark spray on and rub in, evens out and good to go. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
9/25/2003 |
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| roflmao, this is too funny. Once, i used "Sun in" and went in the backyard with a book and glass of wine, fell asleep in my bathing suit on the chaise lounge. when i woke up, i thought i had been sweating. NOPE, it rained on me and I had orange hair |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
9/25/2003 |
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| Well metered verses and very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/25/2003 |
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hehehehe.."Check-mate"...lol!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/25/2003 |
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Been there, done it and scoured with a Brillo pad LOL This is so funny Pen. As always,your own witty look at a slice of life.
~Chrissie x |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/25/2003 |
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My Lawd!! We don't need fake tan in Oz.....Though I shun the sun....you know wrinkles...lol
I did do the fake tan thing once....and I had orange knee's for a bloody month lol!! Not a good look for a first date!! Lucky he thought it was a tad funny.....A great poem.....you always make me grin....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
9/25/2003 |
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| Oh my, be careful and don't burn? Hee, hee, love the write....... |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/25/2003 |
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| Calendula, very well written. Very humorous from my side of the table but I'll bet you were a bit disturbed. When will we ever learn that natural is better. (lol) |
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