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Watching People
by Denise Nowakowski
Saturday, August 09, 2003


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Watching the audience before the concert, during interval and after the concert was finished.



Lots of people come and go


Then they sit and look around;


There’s nothing wrong with that


Except the mere fact,


That doing this they are content.


 


What a waste of precious time.


What a waste of a person’s life


To be talking shop


Or discussing other’s lives.


 


The bell rings,


The lights are dimmed,


A hush follows,


The mood is set.


 


Then the actors on the stage


Sing and talk and seem a fool,


And the audience, laugh and laugh,


Till their tears form a pool.


 


When the actors disappear


And it’s time to stand and go,


All their talking starts anew,


As the lights, come on.


 


What a sorry sight they are


Bobbing, laughing like a clown,


All dressed up to their teeth they are


When, at last they all fall down.         


                                                         


                    © Denise Nowakowski, Aug 2002        


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Reviewed by Michelle Smolen 10/12/2005
Hello Denise, I'm a "winter writer",lol, so I haven't been on for a while...but this is wonderful, surprising and so true! Love it!
Brightest Blessings, Shell
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 8/9/2003
I've noticed the superficiality of crowd attending concerts, too...very nice..
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 8/9/2003

EXCELLENT! Your mind is brilliant. The falling down at the end... The metaphotic value IS PERFECTION in itself! YOU ROCK!

Thanks,
Emilie
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 8/9/2003
A pretty poem that seemed to end on a sour note. Maybe I just didn't understand.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 8/9/2003
Interesting views, Denise.


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