|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|An adroitly phrased spoil alert for poets, eh?|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|You hit it on the head! The only thing that makes sense is to cherish the moment. If another one follows, hallelujah. If it doesn't, at least you l i v e d. Thank you so much for sharing this.
xOx 'Pea' xOx
|Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
|A reminder that life totters on the sharp edge of oblivion—one second you are here and the next you are not.|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|A somber reminder of our fatality. It's a wise and pointed observation. Perhaps we should all carry those comic-book signs reading, "Prepare to meet God."
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
With so few words, you drive home an important point. We're all mortal and don't know when our time is up.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Love it. Short and realistic. Great write.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
I see that bumper sticker: "Shit Happens"
a lot more these days here in the southland.
Seems everything is on a fine line these days,
and any little freakin' wind can topple all of it.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Just goes to show that nothing is forever, huh?
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I think this just happened to me over the past week. Just when things were going so smoothly. A timely reminder. Gratefully mortally yours....Peter.|