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| Reviewed by Allan |
5/11/2003 |
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change the first line to "look of his eyes'
else its bloody good.....love |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
5/10/2003 |
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Sweet...a nice poem.
[do check that first line. It's doesn't make sense] |
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