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| Reviewed by Eugene Williams |
10/27/2009 |
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| again very very good writers truly are born cant learn this thanks take care |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/9/2009 |
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I refuse any destiny so bleak.
I will continue to search
I do love the attitude that you express and share via your verses here, Bobbi. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/4/2009 |
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This is an excellent poem that paints a vivid picture. Being lonely is no FUN. Well done!
Amen |
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| Reviewed by Jackson Aniefiok |
6/29/2009 |
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| narrative. thanks for this lovely work |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/9/2009 |
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Great job Bobbi! So much emotion in your words. Loneliness is such a terrible disease. I guess we all open the door at some point in our lives. But I prefer to slam it shut!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
5/17/2009 |
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Bee there done that and don't ever want to do it again. I didn't like the emotions then and I certainly won't like them now. This is a really well written and emotional poem. I have opened that door to loneliness and despair many times, but lately I have been able to enjoy wha life I have left. That's what family and friends are for; tolighten our mood and help us forget the troubled past. Thank you for sharing Bobbi, this is a real winner.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
5/10/2009 |
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| This is an incredible poem. Sometimes it's so easy to isolate, which then only begins the vicious cycle of more loneliness, more despair, further isolation. Beautiful use of words here. Be good. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/8/2009 |
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| Been there, done that, got the loneliness T-shirt and since used it for a car washing rag...ed |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/8/2009 |
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Those opening the door to loneliness are for a sad treat!
Georg
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/8/2009 |
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You have captured what loneliness feels like! I have visited those halls many a nights..
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/8/2009 |
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Very nicely done and well worth reposting, this gives strength to people who may be struggling on the border and desparatedly trying to keep that door shut...
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