by Megan M Lutz
Sunday, September 15, 2002
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Written by Megan Lutz
I loose myself in you,
I take leave of my sense,
You aroma takes over my being, I can not think straight.
When I take you into my mouth,
And feel you on my tongue,
The pain momentary goes away, and I am carefree….
But the pain in the morning is nothing compared to the pain I felt before…
I drain you fully,
Until there is none left…
Burning down my throat, you hit my stomach like a firebomb,
But I feel no pain, because the only pain I was feeling is now gone….
I must give you up, but I don’t want to…
Temptation… all around me…. Going cold turkey, maybe not a good idea…
But the only way I know that I can do it…
Give it all, or give it nothing, just like how I used to do it…
It is going to be a rough ride…. Long nights sweating…. Shaking…. Convulsions…
I won’t know what to do with myself… I know that I would have to be strong.
All I know is that giving you up, is the hardest thing I will do…
And all because I loose myself in you, once too often….
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|Reviewed by jude forese
|love is not fair... excellent poem...|
|Reviewed by Dorian Petersen Potter
|great poem and with all those human emotions of pain,sadness and longings..very nice imagery in every way..moved me so much..(-:|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Your presentation in verse and imagery has allowed us to feel the pitted emotions.. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|i agree whole heartedly with Linda
great show of emotions!!!
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Great poem Megan...so sad,
with longing and pain. If
this is true and you love him..
don't let him go.