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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/25/2009 |
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I admire those who climb mountains (as long as they take their garbage back home with them); personally, I enjoy looking at the mountains from a distance even though I live on one. You have shared the experience effectively via your verses, Dallas. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
10/12/2009 |
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I think life is like mountains... we have to scale them in order to gain the reward, but the descents can be murder...
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/11/2009 |
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There never was a mountain I didn't want to climb.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/11/2009 |
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| WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Bennett Kremen |
10/10/2009 |
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| A strong poem. |
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| Reviewed by Carol Grace |
10/10/2009 |
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| Great visuals in this piece. I love it when words do what they are supposed to do. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/10/2009 |
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| interesting and well written ... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
10/10/2009 |
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| Dallas...I really like this...the ending says it all! |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
10/9/2009 |
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Dallas,
I've never climbed a moutain, I imagine it's harrowing. you've described it all too well, my friend, which is probably why I'll never climb a mountain.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/9/2009 |
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GREAT piece, Dallas; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx,. Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/9/2009 |
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| The descent from the cruel mistress may be dangerous, but the descent from your poetry carries the same joy as the climb. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/9/2009 |
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That is what they say huh, now that you succeeded going up you still have to come back down, but the challenge is so immense.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/9/2009 |
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| Yep, it's that cockiness in so many things that "gets" you if you are not careful, and who is careful when they are cocky. I know I sure wasn't. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
10/9/2009 |
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| I was going to say that more people died on Everest descending the mountain than climbing it. You took the words out of my mouth with your ending. Nicely written. |
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