|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A tale that sends shivers up and down the spine, and quite apt and timely considering how close we are getting to Halloween. Thank you, Dallas. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|WONDERFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Oh, this is chilling!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Chillingly, effectively penned, Dallas. By the title, was thinking you were going to write about carnival rides gone amok. LOL This is even scarier ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|AAAAHHHH... the sudden switch here reminds me vividly of my most shocking cinematic moment... The Donald Sutherland and Julie Christie classic, Don't Look Now... when the little figure in the yellow mac turns round and isn't a child but a.... disfigured dwarf! HEEEEEEEEEELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've never forgotten it and nearly freaked out when I saw a picture of me on my honeymoon up in the Swiss Alps, huddled in a corner in the rain in a... yellow mac.... Certainly cooled the temperature a bit back then... as does this now... Chilly... Not sure you really need that "Tis me"... just the "now I come for you" does (it) for me... I'm so outta here.... just look at me go........................................... :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Yikes! Chilling write, Dallas; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|You slay one demon, and another pops around. And another. And another. And another. Terror rides indeed. Nice one!|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|The tempo you create adds to the terror. Excellent, as always.|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
You can feel the eeriness in this. Great Halloween story.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I guess age has finally caught up with me / Halloween just doesn't do it for me anymore . . . Over-hyped holiday . . .|
|Reviewed by Carol Grace
|love it---refuse to be afraid--great word pictures, again, Dallas.|