Death will be my freedom
by Stephan van Pinksteren
Wednesday, May 06, 2009
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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The fear of dieing,
It is overwhelming.
Why do I keep on lying?
Is there a way to stop the crying?
I can't hide my feelings anymore,
They show more each day.
They open the closed door.
There is not much I can say.
I can't give enough reasons.
For the things I've done to you.
All the pain passes like the seasons.
I hoped that you would to.
I won't live for centuries,
That's one thing that can't be done.
But you will remain in my memories,
And death will be my freedom.
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|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A well written poem,take care
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
|Hiding feelings is torture, a thousand recurring deaths - and to long for release in "real death" is fatalistic. You put these thoughts quite well in verse, Stefan.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Ouch, so much pain in your words, yet a realization of the "what is".....
Be always safe,