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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
7/19/2006 |
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A fine poem, full of images, and the painting is also
very, very nice! |
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| Reviewed by Arthur Tugman |
6/24/2006 |
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| Karen, It is a delight to read and give you a review. I am enjoying my second day in this Author's Den. I hope you visit me. |
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| Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly |
5/30/2006 |
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| This is so inspiring. Your words paint endless love. Thanks for sharing your special gift. My best, Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Amy Ramdass |
4/19/2006 |
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So sensual and pure...and a tad of sadness
making me realise that I know this "if only
you were here" feeling...
Your poetry say it so accurately.
Amy Ramdass
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/11/2006 |
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Wonderfully passionate and. . .terribly sad, except that it really is true that it is better to have lost and loved than never to have
loved. . .right? Assuming this is autobiographical, you may not feel that way now, but I am betting you will. Live. . .meaning Love. . .ON!! 'Pea' <3 ~~~ Painting's great!! |
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| Reviewed by Damaa -- |
2/28/2006 |
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| I know that feeling :-) |
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| Reviewed by J M |
2/22/2006 |
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| So longing and beautiful this one is very passionate... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/19/2006 |
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| Beautiful write! |
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| Reviewed by Candy T |
1/14/2006 |
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| very touching and sadly something i can relate to - i always struggle to overcome my own pride. happily i'm getting better at it as the years pass. thanks for sharing this piece... it moved me. |
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| Reviewed by R.D. Pounds |
1/6/2006 |
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such a tender and passionate outcry...love from afar leaves much to be desired...does it fulfill a need?
your poem expresses a deep commitment and yearning...much tenderness here
Gina |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/4/2006 |
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a lovely passionate love poem ... captures the mood nicely ...
(trembling) |
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| Reviewed by Iva Lawson |
12/31/2005 |
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| Where, oh where, have all the emotionally accessible men gone? Beautifully written verse about loving a man who's not all there. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
12/18/2005 |
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| Don't you just wish sometimes you could mindmeld and get the message through to these fellas? :-) This poem is so honest. Strikingly universal. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/17/2005 |
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My mind screams,
"I love him,
more than life itself.
I adore him.
I worship him.
I'd give him the world if I could."
Change the "him" to "her" and it all fits, Karen.
A most compelling love offering. Thank you for sharing it.
Love and peace to you.
Regis
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
12/16/2005 |
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You write a great love poem and the painting capped it off so nicely.
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/15/2005 |
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Sweet thoughts of love and longing mixed with a promise of hope for better days. Well done.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
12/15/2005 |
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| Awww you gotta believe in god given love.. The greatest gift for the few mortals who find true soul love.... |
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
12/15/2005 |
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| I found out to not put my trust and all my love in man but God. He loves us all so much and only i we ask him to send us the love of everlasting and a love with no pain then we will be happy. I have learned my friend to ask for no more pain but a peace of mind. Excellent expression of the love you felt. |
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