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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
11/10/2008 |
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Gwen,
Well-done . . . an exceptional poem - thanks for this one!!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by HB Clayton |
5/2/2007 |
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| Amazing the levels that corporate america will sink in order to make that dollar! Imagine the psychological long term effects these tactics have on our children. Needed to be said. Thanks-HB |
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| Reviewed by Dennis Keister |
3/18/2007 |
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| We make most of the things we drink and all the snack food and most of the movies. So stay home with someone you love and maybe after the movie is over you can make something else? Dennis |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
2/10/2007 |
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| Amen! I felt every thrust of your poetic truth blade...lol! You have this country down, smack down. Great piece! Thanks to Andre for pointing me here! |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
2/10/2007 |
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| Excellent, well done Gwen. God Bless, Holly |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/8/2007 |
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| Commericals are quite misleading. One can always hit "MUTE". Good poem.......M |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
11/15/2006 |
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| oh yes....now this I can relate too...tis one of my favorite rants. Excellent work, here lady poet. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
11/8/2006 |
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OMG Gwen, you said it all!!! The second stanza also reminds me of how Wisconsin voted on one of our referendums on Tuesday:
Misleading advertising
Inducements for spending
Mindless compliance
But then politics is nothing more than a shopping trip, to get the public to buy, regardless of how false the advertising is.
Thanks for sharing Gwen.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be." |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
10/23/2006 |
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alas..the truth!
great write..
vesna.) |
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| Reviewed by Russ Okamura |
10/21/2006 |
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| This poem is filled with great passion and truth. you delivered this with real power. Awesome work. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
10/16/2006 |
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I'll buy that for a dollar...oh yes! Let's follow the corporate whore with her dazzling array of trinkets. Brilliant write Gwen, there is much insight and wisdom within your words. Let's hope people begin to wake up to what's really going on.
Blessings
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
10/16/2006 |
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Yep, you said it ... modern brainwashing of the people or, should I say "sheeple"?
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by David Arthur Walters |
10/14/2006 |
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| Dear Gwen, Good Grief, pop up ads are embedded in the PCs now - mine is not linked to the Internet, yet I keep getting pop ups to protect my computer from viruses and so on. But your poem reminded me of my pet peeve, is the deceptive ads of corporations who abuse the word "integrity" in their mission statements. Oh, but get a magnifying glass and look at the fine print, they say, and you'll see our ad was not deceptive. David |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/13/2006 |
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You make some very valid points here, Gwen; most timely. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
10/13/2006 |
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| Brilliant work |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
10/12/2006 |
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A full package of poetic tasks duly delivered in "Pop-Up Poetry".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmnuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/12/2006 |
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Amen to that Gwen
I try not to look a commercial
they seem to insult my intelliegence
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
10/12/2006 |
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Gwen
I always sift the Good from the Bad..
I just turn off mentally...and only take in what I want too..
Powerful write
God Bless
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
10/12/2006 |
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Gwen,
What a tremendous bit of poetic lament - and exacting truth - of the decline of the once Greatest Nation on Earth.
With God out of the picture, every good and perfect gift goes, too...
Super-catchy title, Gwen!
Love, Rhonda
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/12/2006 |
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| This is crafted well and expressed so well. Thank you!!!!!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/12/2006 |
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Cleverly penned, Gwen, the media has stooped to new lows in order to make a buck. Shame. I don't even have the bucks to buy what they're advertising............well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/12/2006 |
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| The media is hell bent on twisting our minds. Great poem. Victor |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/12/2006 |
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Wow! You have hit this button dead on! It puts in mind what a full explanation of my "Perfidious Perversions" might be. Excellent factual poetry Gwen! Kudo's!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/12/2006 |
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So very true...I hate watching too much TV anyways...too much violence!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Steve Patterson |
10/12/2006 |
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so true...
as for me, i just don't watch TV nor listen to the radio nor read newspapers... still my head in the sand and make believe, knowing there is no reality. |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
10/12/2006 |
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Hey I have the perfect product for you. This wonderful software package blocks pop-ups forever. Never be annoyed by those pop-ups again. It only costs.....and on and on it goes. Is there nothing without a price tag anymore?
Good Write,
God Bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
10/12/2006 |
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| the commercials have gotten more important than the programming..msh |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/12/2006 |
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I am so sad to say that all Western civilizations have ended up going this way and your Pop Up Poetry describes it in an all too real fashion. Good lesson.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
10/12/2006 |
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Scary isn't it? A society once totally self-sufficient now finds themselves completely dependent upon others and other countries for our selfish needs. Could we ever go back? It's possible, but not at the rate we are now.
Thanks for the wake up!
Lisa |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/12/2006 |
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| All too true in a secular soon to be godless society if others have their way. We are digging our own graves by buying from countries like China where almost everthing you buy comes from them. We are making them a superpower with our own money, whose ambitions to rule the world are not fantasy. Our corporations have sold us out to foreign cheap labor. |
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