|Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
|Thank you for this fond memory of similar moments in my life. Now, I want to take my wife out to our Willy Dillyh Cafe and capture a bit of that romantic spark once again. Your words were well crafted.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Brings back memories 'By the Bay.' Thee was one night that took in Chinese New Year, Pier 64, and the Midnight Movies with 'The Flaming Creatures' as the gay, gory entree. After that, she was mine until she threw my letter in Sydney Harbor.
I do hope this happened, because you deserve it.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
This has a true-to-life, genuine feel that cuts to the soul. Well done!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a wonderful peace Gwen
thanks for sharing your thoughts
Love & peace be with you
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|Wow where's that cafe again, gotta go there, if it produces writes like this one. Great write and sooooooooooo romantic. Love, Bonnie|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|Your wonderful poem makes me remember how the nudge of a word, sound, or place can trigger a beautiful memory. There are memorable cafes in my history and your poem brought back the memories. A lovely write of a delicious and steamy romance.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Wow Gwen !
This is one steaming hot and passionate poem, tinged with bittersweet memories !
Great to read your terrific works again..:)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|An extremely well told story, Gwen.|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful writing sweet lady..be well and always safe...Hugs|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Well told piece of beauty and endearment shared ....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Marge Fulton
|One hot poem. It is concentrated like frozen juice. Full of sweetness! Love it!|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Wonderful visuals and wow such emotions exploding,,, well done!|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Splendid poetry with vivid imagery|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|The picture you painted here was wonderful. I felt as though I was there! Played out almost like an old film.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Enjoyed the real life feeling of this one as if we were getting a chance to be voyeurs at the breakup of two stunning movie heartthrobs of the fifties...well done Gwen.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Wonderful poem, and I absolutely love San Francisco.