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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
6/17/2003 |
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| Mysterious and haunting. Great feelings with depth. |
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| Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci |
6/16/2003 |
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Gwen,
Tis' true, this I know! Really enjoyed this write!
Hugs,
Maria |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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| I've lived in a couple of haunted houses. Friendly ghosts. Would hate to run into one of the other kind. I love the poem. Good luck on the ebook. I wish you many sales. |
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| Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) |
6/15/2003 |
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Haunting and hypnotic, go, Gwen, Go! This bit is just so shuddery nice,
"Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces"
Good and classically ghoulish, eschewing gore for mood and imagination!
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/15/2003 |
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| A mesmerizing poem, beautifully written! |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/15/2003 |
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| It's as if evil is waiting, lurking, to infect us. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
6/15/2003 |
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| This is spellbinding, voices what we all wonder about. |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
6/15/2003 |
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| Your so right ........super poem ! |
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| Reviewed by Steve Ralph |
6/15/2003 |
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excellent piece although i have to say.. ( not that anyone would believe ) but i was brought up in a haunted house and she was friendly not evil at all.. ahh well i guss even ghosts are different..lol
great poem,,
steve.
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/15/2003 |
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Wonderfully-written, Gwen! I enjoyed this.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
6/15/2003 |
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This was wonderful, Loved it!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Tony Nerone |
6/15/2003 |
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GM, Gwen
I do know of Ghosts! Excellent Write!
tony |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
6/15/2003 |
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This, Gwen, is too astoundingly true!!!!! Thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/15/2003 |
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| Beautiful dark write! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
6/15/2003 |
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Gwen,
This is excellent.
"In haunted places, in hidden spaces
in caves and abodes of fear and dread
demonic forces do lurk and wait
evoking feelings of doom and hate
Bitter memories of times gone by
lovers broken promises, whispered lies
remnant feelings of past disgraces
ever present on ghostly faces "
It is true left to root those very things can grow evil and hate within the heart making it bitter.
Peggy |
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| Reviewed by kay p m-devenish |
6/15/2003 |
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I really enjoyed the pace in this one.
Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/15/2003 |
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| shaking with delight |
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