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  Say It In a Poem
by Patricia J Sanders
Sunday, April 26, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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You hurt me  
Deep within my soul
Lies, pain, fear and joy
Things I don't even know

What you see is normal
What I feel is hidden
But when you force my hand
It is then I know I can

Reach deep down and grab
That which makes it clear
The pain you elicit is numb
A way for you to see me tears,
my fears
The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun


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Reviewed by Gisele Vincent-Page 11/4/2011
Patricia, what a powerful line: The many times your touch reached my heart like a gun. You create a wonderful contrast by using gentle words to describe your pain created by an abuser. Good writing. peace Gisele
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 5/7/2009
I love reading your poetry.You don't hold anything back and you let your feelings come out in your poems.Take care,keep up the great work

Reviewed by Tabitha Carter 4/27/2009
It shot dead on, blazing the emotional devastation of heartache.
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 4/27/2009
Tragic lines of pain and torment. Very moving poem.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 4/27/2009
So full of pain...effectively written.
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