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| Reviewed by lili dauphin |
1/28/2011 |
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| Simply wonderful. Most of our treasures are hidden. If we're brave enough, we 'll always find them. |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/30/2010 |
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| so many treasures if we look deep. I love this color blue. -Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/30/2010 |
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Loved this! Deeply thought provoking....life's journey is full of ups and downs.....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/29/2010 |
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| DARING...AND THEN, THOUGH IT ALL, FINDING THE 'TREASURE' OF...YOURSELF. A MOST ENJOYED WORK, DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/29/2010 |
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Love's Bounty Poetess!!
Lovely Flow & Beautiful Rhyme
Sea Tide & Sandy Toes
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/29/2010 |
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| Wonderful ! |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
8/29/2010 |
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| Clever writing with a wonderful metaphor. Enjoyed this. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
8/28/2010 |
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| Skeptics carry with them the weight of failure. Your treasure proves my point. patrick |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/28/2010 |
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A powerfully meaningful metaphorical write, Poetess. I find the symbolism very effective and evocative as well. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
8/28/2010 |
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Love it! ...and that final line tantalises with its mystery and possibilities.
John |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
8/28/2010 |
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Very clever and flowing ~ a poem of risk and protection...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/28/2010 |
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| Hold it tight. |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
8/28/2010 |
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Very nice! What a vast a wide sea indeed. But your resolve brings hope and a treasure. This is very good.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader) |
8/28/2010 |
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| I like how you have a straight-forward approach. This one is a guiding light, and is very clean. Thanks for this, Poetess. What's in your palm; do you still have that treasure? |
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