|Reviewed by lili dauphin
|Simply wonderful. Most of our treasures are hidden. If we're brave enough, we 'll always find them.|
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|so many treasures if we look deep. I love this color blue. -Morgan|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Loved this! Deeply thought provoking....life's journey is full of ups and downs.....
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|DARING...AND THEN, THOUGH IT ALL, FINDING THE 'TREASURE' OF...YOURSELF. A MOST ENJOYED WORK, DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|Love's Bounty Poetess!!
Lovely Flow & Beautiful Rhyme
Sea Tide & Sandy Toes
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Clever writing with a wonderful metaphor. Enjoyed this.|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Skeptics carry with them the weight of failure. Your treasure proves my point. patrick|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A powerfully meaningful metaphorical write, Poetess. I find the symbolism very effective and evocative as well. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Love it! ...and that final line tantalises with its mystery and possibilities.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Very clever and flowing ~ a poem of risk and protection...
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Hold it tight.|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Very nice! What a vast a wide sea indeed. But your resolve brings hope and a treasure. This is very good.
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|I like how you have a straight-forward approach. This one is a guiding light, and is very clean. Thanks for this, Poetess. What's in your palm; do you still have that treasure?|