|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Oh, Rodney, hurts, this...as, I, well, know this, inside, all too well... and its so hard, at times to enter, when even the 'moon shuns...'
Your heart is so open, one could cry, you allow so many in and make them feel 'allowed in'...
so good to see you once more, been in a darkness and here, this and...
|Reviewed by Jamie Gilcig
|Hi Rodney. You've been there too. It's why I am so grateful to you amigo.
Thanks for everything.
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Sad my friend, I know the feeling though and you express yourself well. You'll always be let in here.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Those days...we endure them.
Very well expressed, Rodney.
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|The theme seems equatible to a black hole, drawing in all light, and as it has been referred before, pulling back the seas.
I wonder why you chose not to utilize the first "As" in S3, It actually makes for more grammatical concisity.
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|A sorrowful, soul-ful piece...woven as only you can weave. Beautiful...|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|If it were not for the darkness, would we then enjoy the light?
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|I can feel the sadness in this piece. Some great lines here.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a state of limbo, excellently penned...|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|So profound, like the title also.
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|Very profound depth.
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Such sad emotions, penned to perfection! ~Z~
Best wishes, Rodney!
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Wonderfully written yet so sad. (((hugs)))
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Rod, nice new addition... I like the title... Thanks for posting.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very deep profound write Rodney!!
i think I can relate to this one!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Deep profound write!|
|Reviewed by June Thompson
|wonderful (though painful to me)
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|I know the feeling.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh my, this was so poignant and moving, very well written, and deeply felt today, beautiful,