How I must be painted
by Alex Nodopaka
Wednesday, May 31, 2006
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She knows he sees
her silhouette
from across the building
and knows
he paints her
as if he were Edgar Degas
But these times
are avant-garde
Her moneymaker shimmies
knowing full well
the peeping Tom
is no Willem de Kooning
He could not keep up
with her spunk
(yes I mean both ways)
or acid rock and
especially her drug-induced
strident lyrics when she fucks
~~~
Alex Nodopaka May©2006
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| Reviewed by Micha Julian |
8/4/2006 |
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damn, you are good!
and so what if you are not de Kooning...maybe some prefer Nodopaka...
you don't know, course, okay, perhaps he is better known, but you are one damned amazing artist...
words/painting, so f'ick gifted, Alex, damn...
no...never a dull read with you, nor image, nor...
well, I'm a fan, and I may even have learned how to spell your name, duh, okay, I am aphasic and off, but I loved this...yes, strakly real and just out there, you are an Artist w/more than an uppercase A.
you just draw one in and one comes back and back to reread and relook, guess you are one fine poet as well...
so THERE!
thanks, always, you are so always there w/a new gift from your gifts or words that make one think and smile and/or ponder when you visit too...
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/2/2006 |
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| ah, the benefits of being an artist ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/2/2006 |
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A captivating offering, Alex. Straight and starkly real. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tracey Hardie |
6/1/2006 |
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| Alex... never a dull read with you! :) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
6/1/2006 |
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stunning work!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/31/2006 |
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Delightfully twisted, this is a most entertaining write.
Take care,
Sherry |
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