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Major Tom Returns
by Patrick A Granfors
Saturday, October 24, 2009
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Northwest Flight 188
Some fields are just too fertile not to plow twice.
To the tune of and adjusted lyrics of David Bowie's "Major Tom"

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Ground control to Major Tom

Ground Control to Major Tom

What the hell is going on?

Suggest you answer intercom

Scrambling F-16’s, countdown’s on

Check your radio and may God’s love be with you

 

This is Ground control to Major Tim

You’ve really laid an Egg

And the papers want to know which lawyer you will snare

Now it’s time to face reporters if you dare

 

This is Major Tim to ground control

They’re knocking at the door, my joint fell to the floor

And my head is floating in a most peculiar way

And the clouds look very different today

 

For here I am sitting in the cockpit, far above the world

My career is through and there’s nothing I can do

 

Though I’m passed 200 lousy miles, and I’m feeling very ill

And I thought my aircraft knew which way to go

Tell my wife I love her job very much since mine is gone I know

 

Ground control to Major Tim

Your circuit was dead and that was wrong

Can you hear me Major Tim?

Can you hear me Major Tim?

Can you hear me Major Tim?

 

Here I am sitting in the cockpit, far above the world

My career is through and there’s nothing I can do

 

 

Copyright 2009 Patrick Granfors

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/26/2009
Well done, Patrick!

Anna
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 10/25/2009
I ALWAYS GIVE THE UNDERDOG THE BENEFIT OF THE DOUBT SO...UNTIL I KNOW FOR SURE AND EVEN THEN...I RESERVE JUDGEMENT. GOOD WRITE THOUGH... THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY ARE GREAT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/25/2009
Excellent,clever sarcasm,I still don't know what happened. I'll reserve judgement until i do. However, I do think our lack of pilots keeps them in the air too long. Something needs to be done!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/25/2009
Well written, Patrick; excellent!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/25/2009
This is quite a mysterious story. It's very hard to believe that they were both fast asleep, or both arguing so much that they somehow missed Miineapolis. I wonder if we'll ever learn the truth.
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 10/25/2009
To be fair, try to work thirteen hours at a stretch EVERYDAY holding thousand of lives in your hands and see how you feel at the end of the week. I hope that those that said they are overpaid buss drivers don't get one on their red-eye fly. St. Peter don't greet shaking hands.

Georg

Reviewed by Paul D Berube 10/25/2009
Very well done, Patrick.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser 10/24/2009
You know what they say, you pay peanuts, you get monkeys. Pilots these days make so little money, it's no wonder these things happen. When the story said they were "discussing airline policy", I reckon that was the mile-high version of bitching at the proverbial water-cooler. Still, it must have been one hell of a conversation! Great, creative poem by the way.
Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/24/2009
That was more than a major faux paux. Unless those guys have an out of this world excuse, I think they should be chopped up into little pieces and fed to the... sorry, I got carried away.
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg 10/24/2009
clever
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