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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
10/29/2009 |
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| This is a message of truth and wisedom.thank you for sharing.take care |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/28/2009 |
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| True and try as we might its hard to displace the pain. Your poem speaks volumes in few words. |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
10/27/2009 |
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Very true. This is so beautiful. Thank you.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Sylvia Corsini (Reader) |
10/27/2009 |
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| This is touching. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/27/2009 |
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| The vicious cycle. Nothing stings like the bite from those we love. Well done Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/27/2009 |
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Beautiful picture coupled with inspiring truths.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/27/2009 |
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| Yes, indeed we seem to do that / I can happily say, however, that within the past year I have laid my burden to rest / I shall live out what remains for the rest of my life guilt-free / It has been a long time in coming, but it is here and I think I should be congratulated / Free! Great Gawd Almighty! I'm free at last! |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/27/2009 |
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Truth in these words, Patrick. I really felt this one. Thanks.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/27/2009 |
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Wonderful write, Patrick; well done! My prayers are with Paul today and always!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
10/27/2009 |
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| When I grow up I want to write like you. This is a great poem. TRUTH. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/27/2009 |
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| Family Hurt is always very sad. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/27/2009 |
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Excellent, Patrick, short and sweet and perfectly penned. Not just for Paul, but for all of us who've been hurt ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
10/27/2009 |
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| Great message here, Patrick. Well done. Thanks my friend and God bless. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
10/27/2009 |
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| Wise and beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/27/2009 |
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Number one son should be the one to take care of the father.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/26/2009 |
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| Great advice. |
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