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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
11/1/2009 |
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Wow! I visited the Golden Gate back in 1980...awesome sight. Poor souls that decide there's nothing worth living for in this world. What a horrible end! Very well penned my friend.
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/31/2009 |
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Well written... Very descriptive.
Cheers,
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
10/31/2009 |
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| And I expected a poem about a dragon. This is a different kind of roar. Good use of that strange picture as your muse. e |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
10/31/2009 |
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| People talk themselves in to suicide a while before it occurs. You have a written a realistic depiction of a dreadful event. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/31/2009 |
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Sausalito native here, before and after the bridge was build, pride of Californians and sometimes disgraced by poor souls that didn't knew better how to cope with the real life issues. Suicide ain't no solution.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/31/2009 |
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| So sad and tragic, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Paul D Berube |
10/31/2009 |
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| Well described in your words, Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser |
10/30/2009 |
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| I used to live right near there. Bay and Laguna. People would say to me: "This is SF. If you can't have fun here, there's the God-damned bridge!" Made sure to have fun, even if I was pretending. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/30/2009 |
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Still can't understand what drives people to do this; once they do it, they can't come back or make amends. Sad!
Powerful write and arresting piccy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
10/30/2009 |
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Hi Patrick, A very stunning write from a horrible truth. Really makes one think. Thank you for sharing....
In Spirit,
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/30/2009 |
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These are very sobering thoughts my friend. Well done. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/30/2009 |
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Disturbing,but excellent! S sad to think they would choose it!
Wish I could know their minds... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/30/2009 |
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| I took a walk to the middle of the Mississippi River Bridge in New Orleans many, many years ago / I walked back |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/30/2009 |
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Whoa ...
That is a long way to fall.
I like this Pat. But I am always stunned
at what some people choose as options.
r |
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