|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Certainly not what I expected when I read the title.
Interesting and SO sad. By any chance, are you ever called a pessimist?
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Dark and deep. The life of a human can be torture for we can't see the point of it all. But maybe if we did, we wouldn't learn what we need to learn? Powerful, Patrick...
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite profound, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|The stick of the donkey are the envy of the stallion! (LOL)
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|The cruel hand of fate or whatever it is called just keeps that darned carrot in front of us and you just can't resist trying to grab. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Intriguing write, Patrick; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|The stick, ah yes the stick, on the ass, or is it a donkey, but still a little persuation can go a long way. Ithacoras, did he ride an ass, he went for the light too, didn't he. I'm so confused.
Good one Patrick!~ Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very well done, Patrick. You've said a mouthful here.|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|I like this a lot. Change of pace. Nice one Patrick.|
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|A quote from page 529 of "Becoming':
Opening his eyes, taking a deep breath.
Since he was fifteen God had dangled that carrot in front of him and always pulled it away…
But No! Nothing was going to happen to stop it now…
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Hey, that madness is only in your existence, not the rest of us, or that donkey'...e|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|wow!patrick...this was a thrice read...provocative...oh nooo...my brain had to work....not always used to that...really like this patmedlin|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Clever write, Patrick....and we'll all chase that carrot until that final blow. Only a small portion of that sand in the hourglass belongs to us...enjoyed. Thanks!