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by Patrick A Granfors
Friday, April 09, 2010
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Remember, Grandma is always right.


The faster I go

The behinder I get

My Grandma used to say


But being young

Such things far flung

From the innocence of the day


Then as I grew

With tasks to do

Along this path called living


The pace picked up

While I slowed down

A scene most unforgiving


I’m behinder

Despite my speed

 I contemplate at night


The faster I go

The behinder I get

My Grandma sure was right





Copyright 2010 Patrick A. Granfors


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Reviewed by Sandi Schraut 4/10/2010
She sure as hell was! Sorry but as an oldster I reserve the right to be naughty!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 4/10/2010
Wise old Grandmas usually are right.
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 4/10/2010
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 4/10/2010
Oh brother! "...A scene most unforgiving..." everybody is hurrying on or I am getting slower...I hope it is the first, I am too old to try running to catch up with them (LOL)


Reviewed by Ed Matlack 4/9/2010
And you are getting so much closer to your grandma's age, (OLD) so you know how she felt...LOL ;-) Ed
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/9/2010
I appreciate the philosophical outlook that you have shared within your verses here, Patrick. They remind me of what it was like before I took early retirement. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Paul Berube 4/9/2010
I can most definitly relate to this. Great write, Patrick.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 4/9/2010
Loved this lighthearted look at life's rush!!! Well penned, my friend.

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors 4/9/2010
Sometimes it helps to make a list of priorities when time gets tight although I know that is antithetical to the Granfors' clan.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 4/9/2010
that's because all the products we use to cut down on time actually make us busier. cell phones, text messaging, e-mails, Internet, etc. strange paradox. the price of convenience it would seem.
Reviewed by pat medlin 4/9/2010
another good one make me want to 'get back on the boat' mind's full just can't seem to slam it down on paper...patmedlin
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