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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
8/31/2010 |
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Mentioning the end makes the reader feel the linear nature of time, while the structure of your poem also reminds us of its cyclical nature.
A landscape that has a lot to say...
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/29/2010 |
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POWERFUL INSIGHT...FOR AT THAT TIME EVEN THE 'ROCKS' WILL CRY OUT...NO HIDING PLACE!!! WELL DONE, PATRICK; PHRASES AND IMAGERY ARE WONDERFUL. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
8/28/2010 |
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I love desserts, they are so lucious... nevermind!
Desert living has always been tenuous. When water and food run out, people leave. Their artifacts remain, and peyote conjures up strange tongues.
Weirdly cool.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins |
8/26/2010 |
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| The soul speaks quietly... |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
8/26/2010 |
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| Like it. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
8/25/2010 |
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Then the world and humanity will have come full circle from beginning to end...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by The Poetess |
8/25/2010 |
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| Love the depth in this. It reminds me of my life's journey.....only my days will never end, because those stepping stones will just become clouds. ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
8/25/2010 |
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I'm glad that I was able to attend, Patrick. The burn of the Anti-Christ's demise...
Love,
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
8/25/2010 |
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Powerful write Patrick! The imagery is resplendent with metaphor. The first and last lines are beautiful.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/25/2010 |
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| Nicely conceived Patrick. Interesting you used an Anasazi cliff dwelling as an illustration. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/25/2010 |
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Quite arresting photo, and compelling verse! Excellent, Patrick!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/25/2010 |
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| timeless, the picture to, is like entering another world. -morgan |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
8/25/2010 |
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| Different for you, but quite excellent...e |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
8/25/2010 |
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| Through your words, I think I hear it, "Across the ages." Very well said Patrick. Thanks, Dick |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
8/25/2010 |
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Wow! Momentarily speechless! This is fantastic writing...clever phrasing...nicely done, my friend!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
8/25/2010 |
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| This is excellent Patrick!! Excellent, excellent, excellent!! Great vocab I'm sporting today. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
8/25/2010 |
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Great, thoguhtful poem, Patrick. The only thing missing are the tumbling tumbleweeds. I hope your AC is still working and the cold beer and watermelon are holding out.
Your friend, Mark |
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