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  Dream Song
by Patrick A Granfors
Friday, December 10, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.

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I wrote a song that no one heard

Its notes beyond the common scale

Sweet and distant almost silent

Far above the world so frail


I wrote the lyrics no one read

Words of truth no compromise

The composition intertwined

With music’s whispered soft reprise


I tried to share it with the world

It fell on deaf ears it would seem

So often we do not transcend  

The things we do while in a dream




Copyright 2010 Patrick Granfors



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Reviewed by Eileen Granfors 12/14/2010
Sometimes our words heal us even if we throw them out into a vast silence.
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 12/13/2010
This piece has a lovely lyrical bounce to it, Patrick! I love this!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 12/12/2010
Your dream was valid. Sound needs an atmosphere to be heard. On the other hand, to catch a dream is rare as air.

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 12/12/2010
Sounds like a beautiful dream song Patrick!! Most of our best dreams are forgotten when we wake. I have tried with all my might to remember but I guess that means they were intended just for me!! Love, and peace always~ ~Chessly
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/12/2010
Keep Writin, and Keep Dreamin, my friend.
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 12/11/2010
Yeah...I can relate at times. This is a good write Patrick.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 12/11/2010
reminds me of an h.p. lovecraft story called the "the quest of iranon" which i'm quite fond of as of this little gem patrick.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 12/11/2010
Very nicely done, Patrick.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 12/10/2010
well said
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/10/2010
I tried to share it with the world
It fell on deaf ears it would seem
So often we do not transcend
The things we do while in a dream

I find myself completely understanding and empathizing with what you have expressed within your verses here, Patrick. I love the flow of this creative piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,


Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 12/10/2010
such truth to this, sadly i guess, but if one thing we do touches just one other--well, then we have had an impact
Reviewed by Axilea MU 12/10/2010
Very nice! The solitude of unshared dreams and something of the human condition in your words.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen 12/10/2010
This is meltingly wistful. Aren't they wonderful escapes, though!?
You can do anything you please in a dream, never tell a soul. I do it all, believe me.
Thanks for this,
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 12/10/2010
And here I thought you wrote everything you have ever written while in dream world...e
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron 12/10/2010
Can you imagine if all we did in dreams became real life facts? But you have hit on a great sadness: that whatever is said or done in a dream usually goes unseen by the ones we love most...

Chip Bergeron
Reviewed by Richard King 12/10/2010
You too? I've walked that same walk and talked that same talk. I'm a lousy singer though, and I always figured that's why no one listens. Nicely done Sir Patrick. Thanks Dick
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