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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
12/14/2010 |
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| Sometimes our words heal us even if we throw them out into a vast silence. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
12/13/2010 |
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This piece has a lovely lyrical bounce to it, Patrick! I love this!
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/12/2010 |
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Your dream was valid. Sound needs an atmosphere to be heard. On the other hand, to catch a dream is rare as air.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Chessly Nesci |
12/12/2010 |
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| Sounds like a beautiful dream song Patrick!! Most of our best dreams are forgotten when we wake. I have tried with all my might to remember but I guess that means they were intended just for me!! Love, and peace always~ ~Chessly |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
12/12/2010 |
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| Keep Writin, and Keep Dreamin, my friend. |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
12/11/2010 |
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Yeah...I can relate at times. This is a good write Patrick.
Peace,
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| Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) |
12/11/2010 |
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| reminds me of an h.p. lovecraft story called the "the quest of iranon" which i'm quite fond of as of this little gem patrick. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
12/11/2010 |
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| Very nicely done, Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
12/10/2010 |
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| well said |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/10/2010 |
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I tried to share it with the world
It fell on deaf ears it would seem
So often we do not transcend
The things we do while in a dream
I find myself completely understanding and empathizing with what you have expressed within your verses here, Patrick. I love the flow of this creative piece. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
12/10/2010 |
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| such truth to this, sadly i guess, but if one thing we do touches just one other--well, then we have had an impact |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
12/10/2010 |
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Very nice! The solitude of unshared dreams and something of the human condition in your words.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/10/2010 |
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This is meltingly wistful. Aren't they wonderful escapes, though!?
You can do anything you please in a dream, never tell a soul. I do it all, believe me.
Thanks for this,
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/10/2010 |
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| And here I thought you wrote everything you have ever written while in dream world...e |
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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
12/10/2010 |
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Can you imagine if all we did in dreams became real life facts? But you have hit on a great sadness: that whatever is said or done in a dream usually goes unseen by the ones we love most...
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
12/10/2010 |
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| You too? I've walked that same walk and talked that same talk. I'm a lousy singer though, and I always figured that's why no one listens. Nicely done Sir Patrick. Thanks Dick |
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