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| Reviewed by Chip Bergeron |
3/6/2012 |
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Compelling poem, Patrick. Is it based on fact? Sounds like something that might happen in any city in the USA.
Chip Bergeron |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
1/28/2012 |
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All too real *Patrick* needing
to make all one's blessings count!!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
1/27/2012 |
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This sounds like it might be something from the L.A. headlines, maybe even bigger than that, but I'm not familiar with it.... (didn't show up on my sports page)
I like the way your poems so often call attention to and put a spin (often comical) on things from the news. I also like that this one took the serious route, not a joking matter....
Thanks Dick |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/26/2012 |
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| cruelty shows no mercy, only misery ... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/26/2012 |
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| Sad, indeed. And it's not just L.A. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
1/25/2012 |
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THE SPIRIT OF 'MISERY' COVERS THE WHOLE EARTH...AND THERE IS ONLY ONE ANSWER; '...WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS NOW IS LOVE, SWEET LOVE...' THANKS FOR SHARING, PATRICK. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
1/25/2012 |
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| A well-done outpouring of the human condition! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/25/2012 |
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| heartbreaking! Will we ever find the answers, Patrick? |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
1/25/2012 |
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"Misery". I don't think it's in the name but how she is brought up. Name doesn't matter; attitude and personal responsibility do.
Good poem, ol' pal...
And thank you for all the gas yesterday
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
1/25/2012 |
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| A day of sadness, proclaimed in many cities..Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
1/25/2012 |
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| Well done, Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
1/25/2012 |
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| True or false, matters not. What matters is that this scenario is happening on a daily basis throughout the land. Sad write . . . |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/25/2012 |
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I was going to joke about this, but it is too sad. “Can't we all get along.” Doesn't seem to apply to the human race. If we don't have a full life, we resort to escapism. Escapism usually results in misery. A vicious cycle few escape.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
1/25/2012 |
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I guess a name Misery is a sad indicatin of the life she was born into....such a tragic story that is the story of far too many children everywhere...Well done, Patrick!
Anna |
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