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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
6/19/2012 |
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| Excellent, Patrick. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
6/18/2012 |
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Very kool write, Patrick....love the pic too!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Tom Hyland |
6/15/2012 |
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PAT ... WELL DONE!
REMINISCENT OF 'THE ROAD NOT TAKEN' |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/15/2012 |
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Now this is classic! It beats my relationship poem that I'm posting tomorrow all to hell.
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/15/2012 |
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Funny, I was just showing my grandson how to throw a rock so it skids on the surface of the ocean. Your poem touched me so.
Your lines were felt within my mindseye as I read them, I could almost put myself there...
Amazing poetry, Patrick!
Peace, love and light,
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Michael Hollingsworth |
6/15/2012 |
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| Excellent! Thank you. |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
6/14/2012 |
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And perhaps the better for it *Patrick*
writing superb poetry about it....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
6/14/2012 |
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Nostalgia en gros, things that might have been, thank God for who you are now, we'd miss ya, had you turned out different, and then?
and then? and then? And..... Hugs! |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
6/14/2012 |
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Patrick,
a stunning poem, beautifully written.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
6/14/2012 |
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Kind of like sitting in the barber's chair with a full length mirror before you and a full length mirror behind you and, there you are, actually seeing yourself as your "what might have been" seen, literally seen from here to eternity.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
6/14/2012 |
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is this the view from the glass house? or a hell low from the nether regions? Either way or any which way you look at it, the imagery and the metaphor are superb! Nicely penned, Patrick...
Sorry for not commenting more on your work, but I've been swamped with work of my own lately... just finally getting back to reading and commenting... hope you are well, though.
Roger |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
6/14/2012 |
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You have written a marvelously deep poem, very deep indeed prolific Patrick ~
Christine |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
6/14/2012 |
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| not expecting serious ...this was very good patrick...luv sseeing different sides of you...p |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
6/14/2012 |
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| Ain't dat da truff? |
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
6/14/2012 |
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"..What might have been - Was just a stone’s throw away.." Aaaaahh, and so it is with so many of life's gifts, just out of reach.
Nice one Patrick. Dick
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
6/14/2012 |
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| Next time I will just throw u directly and str8 down, making one wave & you will sink to the murky depths....;-) |
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