A CALLOUS HEART
by
Nicole Weaver
Monday, July 27, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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More purging from this week-end. Some feelings lie dormant deep inside of us, as much as we would like to keep buried these horrible feelings it is best to let them come out. Letting them come to the surface is helping me renew myself to become the best me ever.
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The venom of hate......
has become your best friend
you have allowed her to penetrate
your heart, you spend.......
day and night
engulfed in her grip
Fight!.......
Slip!.......
away from her web of deceit!
I despise what you have become
merciless, inhumane, you are the complete
personification of wickedness, cause you have succumbed
to the call of the evil one!
© 2009 Nicole Weaver
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| Reviewed by Jen Knox |
10/5/2009 |
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great poem... i always enjoy reading your work because it's so emotionally-charged. also, love the pic.
jen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/31/2009 |
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I appreciate you philosophical perspective, Nicole. You express yourself with conviction. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/28/2009 |
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| very strong emotions, well expressed! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
7/27/2009 |
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Well said through the purity of your forgiving heart...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
7/27/2009 |
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Passion is one of our greatest gifts, but like many other things in life is great only when properly channeled and controlled and, in the instance of hate, left curbside for the trash collectors.
Purge away, Dear Heart!
Richard
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/27/2009 |
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| WHEN WE ARE AT OUR 'WEAKEST' POINT IN OUR LIVES ...GOD IS AT HIS 'STRONGEST' POINT IN OUR LIVES. THIS IS WELL WRITTEN AND FILLED WITH GOOD PHRASES AND CLEAR IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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