by Nicole Weaver
Wednesday, June 09, 2010
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I went on a sunset cruise in Cabo San Lucas, while on the boat I took this picture. I was in total awe with what I saw, so in expressing my thoughts , I wrote this short piece. These are the words that came to my mind as I reflected on what I captured in this picture.
I do not understand how you came about
all I can do is appreciate your beauty
vast and wide are you
you stand tall, full of grandeur
you are solid no one can bend
or break you, centuries have gone by
yet your beauty still fascinate all
that are lucky enough to come across
If I could I would wrap my arms around you fervently
to let you know how much I adore you
for now, I am happy to let you be who you are
I will continue to admire you forever, for you are destined
to make men, women, and children go gaga over you!
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|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|AH...WHAT WONDERFUL PHRASES OF APPRECIATION FLOW FROM YOUR PEN. YES...GOD GIFTS TO OUR 'EYES' ARE TRULY SOMETHING TO BE APPRECIATED. FOR WHAT OUR EYES BEHOLD ALSO TOUCHES OUR MINDS AND SPIRITS, AS YOU HAVE SO ARTISTICALLY PROVEN. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have shared the beauty of this place very effectively via your verses here, Nicole. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Superb poem!! Would have loved to have seen a picture. I can only imagine.|