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Saying the right thing can sometimes be dificult
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Words come cheap
when its over a line
you try so hard
to get it right.
Not intended to sound that way
but the gap in between
sort of
makes you say.
As you push send
you think ever more
should I have said
less before.
Travel you words
as were intended
make my thoughts heard
be as I wanted,
carry my care
even if lacking
maybe I was not
as understanding.
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/10/2010 |
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LEARNING TO SAY WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY, JUST THE WAY YOU WANT PEOPLE TO UNDERSTAND IT...CAN BE DIFFICULT. IT IS USUALLY BY UPS AND DOWNS THAT WE GET IT RIGHT BUT EVEN THEN...EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE...A MISTAKE IS MADE. AT THESE TIMES ONE MUST RELY ON THE 'KINDNESS' OF THE READER TO GIVE THE WRITER THE BENEFIT OF THE DOUBT OF BEING 'HUMAN' AND ERRING. THIS IS A GOOD WORK JOHN, WHICH HIGHLIGHTS A MATTER USUALLY NO SPOKEN OF. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
3/10/2010 |
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I was always told by my older siblings to measure my words. This of course means do not say anything you will be sorry for. I do not know if I am reading you correctly, John. But I think you are more or less writing that. A excellent crafted piece.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony |
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