Ocean Eyes
by Chris W Reed
Monday, June 22, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Love is a journey. Through rough waters, sunny days, and thunderstormed waterways, it's all part of the experience. |
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The tides sweep me under,
In ocean eyes of blue,
Journeying into the unknown,
A single one-man crew,
The sunlight shining bright,
In hopes of worlds anew,
Glimmering one way glass,
Concealed ocean’s truth,
The day begins to end,
Yet sailing sails on through,
Into windy, twisted lands,
Into your eyes,
Into love,
Into you.
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| Reviewed by Sister Deborah Young |
7/3/2009 |
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| Chris: Great Job! A Most Brilliant Poem. Thanks. In His Greatest Love, Sister Deborah A. Young |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
6/23/2009 |
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| A marvelous poem and pic, Chris. Journey On, and Welcome to A.D.! |
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| Reviewed by Z McClure |
6/22/2009 |
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Chris you have skillfully used such simple word pictures to convey in a fresh way the mystery, depth and intimacy of this thing called love. I really enjoyed this poem! Outstanding in my opinion.
~ a fellow human & poet |
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| Reviewed by Misty Graves Thomason |
6/22/2009 |
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| nice rhythm and imagery. |
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