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The Sea
by Laura Frisk
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It strikes like hot fire, electric and warm

Slipping into every open crevasse gorge

Everything else becomes silent material

Unveiling the delicate design of the ethereal

 

It consumes me with light from the sun

As I drift through the universe undone

Grounded by one string burning my core    

Showing me everything that I should be living for

 

In one subconscious fault, I stumble

And my foundation quickly crumbles          

It falls away and I'm left alone

With only a dream of that amorous home

 

The static and noise swiftly returns

As the wheels begin to swivel and churn

I'm sinking in the cold, lonely depths of blue

Yearning for the embrace of that yellow hue

 

But he doesn't come, when I need him the most

And what once was near me ebbs from the coast

Leaving me waiting anxiously, hoping for a time

When the sea will return and bring me where the ocean meets the sky

 

But in his absence it's hard to remember

My vision is cloudy and my flesh wants to surrender

My body is weak and it's pulling me under

I'm going to die because of one unwilled blunder

 

I lift my eyes to gaze at the sea

Hoping soon I'll see him calling out to me

That he never really left me at all

He was waiting for me to follow and embrace the call

 

I'll sharpen my eyes and wait for that day

All I can do is hope and to pray.



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Reviewed by jude forese
emotions collide in this poem like choppy waves upon the shores of your hopes and desires ... nice!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
So chillingly smooth as if the mind is drifting gently from one realm to another...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Your verses leave me thinking he does not deserve you. Like Christine, your verse did grab my soul. Take care, Laura. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
my...this tugs at the heart....such beauty and emotions run through my blood as I read this.
Christine
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