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Feel
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Deborah Ann Tornillo
Friday, October 30, 2009
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Feel
I can’t breath
It’s gone
I try
I’m drowning.
Breathe
Breathe in
I know the words
I can’t breathe
Tired
Oh, so tired
No breath
Can’t breathe
Shame
I need to be strong
I can’t.
God, help me
Breathe
Tomorrow
Feel my tears……
Deborah Ann Tornillo
Copyright© 2009
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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/30/2009 |
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Powerfully written Deborah! Be encouraged
and keep on writing!
Much Love,
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/30/2009 |
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Your verses leave me breathless, Deborah Ann. Powerfully effective. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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